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實例一:
一個名為Islip的地方的town center的現在與將來
高分范文:(中括號內為解析!)
【寫作思路核心:兩個時間點上的樣子的比較不要先寫第一張圖,再寫第二張圖,而是拿第二張圖去對比第一張圖】
【Introduction】
The two maps illustrate a comparison between the future and the present layout of Islip town center.
【Body – Para. 1】
The most noticeable change is that a dual carriage way 【遇到名詞的時候,考慮有沒有修飾/補充信息的可能性:同位語、從句、動詞分詞、形容詞短語等形式】, a loop that contains most of the town center’s facilities, will be built as a replacement of the current main road 【遇到名詞的時候,考慮有沒有修飾/補充信息的可能性:同位語、從句、動詞分詞、形容詞短語等形式】, a straight west-east way going through the town center. 【Grammatical Range: 主系表結構、表語從句、同位語、定語從句、動詞分詞作后置定語】 The school and residential area outside the loop will remain south of it.
【Body – Para. 2】
【忌諱:過分描述每個建筑物的詳細位置/占地/數量】 Changes will also happen to the core of the town center. It is most noteworthy that the shops on the north side of the present main road will be removed, and the land will be redeveloped with a bus station, a shopping center, a car park and a new housing area built as replacements of the shops. 【Grammatical Range: 主系表結構、主語從句、介詞短語作狀語】Meanwhile, the main road will prohibit all vehicles. Also, the plan affects 【不對動詞否定,而對名詞否定】 neither the location nor the number of the shops on the south side of the main road, while the eastern part of the current housing area will be revamped. In addition, the park will stay where it is but with a shrinkage.
【where引導的三種成分:
1) 定語:This is the place where I was born.
2) 名詞:This is where I eat.
3) 狀語:It will stay where it is.】
【Conclusion】
Overall, the town center of Islip,according to the development plan, will be more complex and multi-functional.
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